Does your manuscript have to be perfect? If you’ve already written a best seller, your agent and editor may cut you some slack. If not, yes, that book better be pretty darn near perfect, or nobody is going to look at it. Agents receive hundreds of queries a week. They don’t have time to read everyone. If your work is full of grammatical and structural errors, that’s all the excuse they need to toss it to the side and move on to the next one.
I sent my first manuscript out to five different agents. I was very excited and a little anxious to hear what they had to say. I expected some rejections but not all. I had put over a year into that novel. It was my baby.
Well, two didn’t respond at all, one said no thanks, and another said it wasn’t what they were looking for. The fifth one responded with a rejection, but also included a why. There were numerous grammatical and structural errors, I was head hopping, and the dialogue dragged.
While I was disappointed, I did take her advice to heart and began the process of editing and correcting structural and grammatical errors. I was one of those people that fell for the myth that it didn’t have to be perfect, they have editors to clean that up for you.
I also took on-line courses on writing dialogue that moves your story forward. I had never really thought about dialogue moving a story forward, but I see it now, and have a pretty good understanding of what the on-line instructors were trying to get across.
As far as the POV goes, I never heard of ‘head hopping’. I went to google and typed it in. It’s not a hard concept to grasp, but it can be tricky at times and sneak in when you least expect it 🙂
Truth be known, I was ashamed of myself for sending such poor work to an agent. I never realized how bad it was until I began the arduous process of editing and revising. I definitely didn’t make a good first impression.
Do your homework. When you’re writing your first novel, there is so much you don’t know. You’ll figure that out along the way. It’s a lot more complicated than just putting pen to paper. And you probably thought anybody could do it.
I hope my blogs help you to avoid some of the mistakes that I have made.