What’s a word echo? I’m sure you have an idea, even if you haven’t heard the term before. It’s the use of the same word in close proximity or in the same sentence.
It’s considered ugly and inelegant. Don’t do it! The good news is, it’s probably one of the easiest mistakes to correct.
Just delete one of the repeated words if you can do so without changing the meaning of the sentence. If that doesn’t work, you’ll simply have to replace the duplicate with a new word.
That can be a little tricky. You have permission to pull out the thesaurus, just don’t get carried away, and consider the word you’re using as a replacement.
Example:
Angrily– bitterly, impetuously, tempestuously, threateningly, fiercely, furiously, violently, infuriatingly, tigerishly (I didn’t make this one up)….
Many of the words listed are the same but different. They range from a slight variation in meaning to utterly ridiculous.
Footnote: It’s okay to repeat if you’re writing poems, songs, or emphasizing a point. An example would be Martin Luther King Jr’s I Have A Dream speech. His repeats were intentional and poetic.
Just something to think about.
-Jan R
Writing your first novel-Things you should know 