When you write, you want to use the active voice. It’s clean, concise, and simple. The active voice is easy to read and understand.
Subject + Verb
- Susie sang.
- Michael ate.
- Jeffery kicked.
Subject + Verb + Direct Object
- Susie sang songs.
- Michael ate soup.
- Jeffery kicked cans.
These examples are basic, and can be embellished with adjectives, adverbs, modifiers, etc. to dress them up, but the Subject/Verb order should remain the same.
95% of your sentences should be written in the active voice. You want the doer/subject at the beginning of the sentence.
When you use the passive voice in writing, you have to introduce new parts of speech just to make the sentence mean the same as it would in active voice. The result is a wordy sentence that makes you wait to find out who the subject is.
Passive voice – Direct Object + Dead Verb + Participle form of Verb + optional Preposition + optional Subject.
The winner was written on the community board by Carol. (Passive)
Carol wrote the winner on the community board. (Active)
As you can see, passive voice is not simply a reversal of active voice. It has additions, and I haven’t discussed the fact that many passive sentences are incomplete.
The message was sent.
So the above sentence is grammatically correct, but it’s missing information. Who sent the message, and to whom was it sent?
Why would anybody use the passive voice? Well it comes in handy if you’re a businessman or politician. It allows you to avoid responsibility.
- Your position has been eliminated. vs. I eliminated your position.
- Your taxes will be raised. vs. I will raise your taxes.
When you’re writing a novel, you’re not trying to avoid responsibility. You’re trying to draw your reader into an exciting adventure that keeps your reader turning pages until the very end.
Keep your sentences active. Something to think about 🙂