Did you get rid of the filler words? Search for the words there, here, and it followed by a verb like is, are, was, and were. Those weaken your writing by diluting it and taking focus away from the object and often make your sentences longer. Estelle Erasmus, Writer’s Digest
There are many people who write. Vs. Many people write.
It was a great party. Vs. The party was great.
Something else to think about.